A few things wrong with this game -
- The sound effects were just atrocious. They didn't seem to fit at all, especially the "button" sound effect. The voice-over was also very patronising, with un-funny remarks. Overall the sound effect just seemed rushed, and seemed like a last minute feature you added to the game.
- On the same line as sound effects, why did the voice over talk about "portal" so much? I know it inspired you, but, the game is nothing like portal with totally different play mechanics etc... not all they players who might play your game will know about the "portal" franchise. So again, it just seems like filler dialogue you added to the game, which in my opinion is defiantly NOT needed. and just makes your game seem very sloppy.
- I don't know if this is something I personally just experienced, or if it is something only Mac users experience. But when looking around it is way to sensitive. I found myself, quite often, having to turn around multiple times, just to pick up a box. If this is a "meant to be, purposely added" feature (making the looking around way to sensitive) it is just inadequate and makes certain areas, un-playable.
- I know the game is all about bugs, but, there are so many un- intentional bugs. Too many to name (PM me if you want to know). These occur on different browsers, different computers (Linux, Mac, Pc). Its just sloppy again, and things you could easily fix if you took the time to test play your game even once before uploading it.
- The glitch texture when you are preforming "intentional" bugs, gets very receptive & annoying. It even gave one of my friends who test played the game a migraine.
- The textures are very bland. There is also glitches in the last room with the wall. Look at free textures you can download, there are some interesting ones that could have fit this game.
Overall quite a good game considering it took you 9hrs to complete, but there are 100% things you should sort out (mentioned above)